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Thursday, February 17, 2011

Blogs I love

There are lots of blogs that I like. The three that most stuck out as good blogs over all are Emma p, Gabby V, and Erin G.

Emma's blog shows that she has a lot of writing talent. Her poetry is really well written. She expresses herself in her poetry in a quite thorough way. She especially expresses herself in her incident poem.

"In the snow.
The beautiful white snow.
The soft snow.
Building a snowman.
A tall snowman.
Its elegant long stick
arms jutting out from its body.
I love this snowman."

This is my favorite part of her incident poem.

Gabby shows a lot of herself in her writing. She expresses herself and her life outside of school. She has an interest in fashion and her writing and poetry expresses that.

"I sketched.
Non stop, my hand maneuvered
around the white sheet,
creating shapes, and
smooth contour lines.
I was in the zone."

Erin has just a natural ability to write poetry. Her what is poetry poem is an amazing poem. I hope she writes more poetry because she has a natural talent. Her blog also expresses her through her writing. One of my favorite parts of her what is poetry poem is this...

"Poetry is the sound of your feelings
ringing out on a paper and
tempting your reading taste buds
The sound of your heart beating
through stanza's till everyone in
the world can hear your thump
Poetry is the laughter in your heart ,
the glimmer in your eye , and
the smile stretching across your face."